186. Jogging has become extremely popular. Explain why you jog or why you don't.
Jogging is a good exercise for us as a human being. Why it is good? Simple reason, since it is an active activity, and it makes us feel better. That is why it is good. I see that some people do not like jogging. The fact is that they are just being lazy. They are rather sitting in front of their laptop, TV, PSP, or even comics and do nothing for a whole day. Maybe those stuffs that they do are not bad for one or two weeks, but for a long term…. Hmmm, I do no think that is a good idea. People nowadays are just becoming fat and fatter due to their laziness. One small advice to help those lazy people to get their butt off their position they are right now. That is jogging. Hopefully, they want to follow that advice. Come back to me, and this is my answer for this question, I do jog. I do not intestinally in love with jogging like some experts. But I like it, because when I jog, I can forget about those bad things that happened to me. Maybe I think about my future, think about the life and find out what I need to do to accomplish my goal. Sometime, I can think of some better ideas or solutions for my projects, essay, or even my love life. For me jogging is also just an excuse for nothing playing sports since I am not good. I do not know since when jogging becomes a part of my life, due to the fact that I have to jog to school every day. I cannot deny the fact that jogging is bad. Repeating the reason why I jog is that I can really find out what I am looking for.
First of all, a few plural mistakes such as "human beingS". There are also some other obvious grammatical errors.
ReplyDeleteYou attacks people with your assumptions. There are many reasons why people wouldn't jog. I'm sure not jogging is not the only reason why people are fat!
"I cannot deny the fact that jogging is bad." this sentence completely contradicted your whole post.
Your last sentence is not needed because you have already mentioned that in your post.
You spent too much time talking about others. It's nice from the middle part you started talking about you and jogging, and i think that's what this topic is asking from you.